The biggest thing I noticed when going through my paper and looking at each sentence to see how it connects to what’s around it, is that I somehow manage to start every sentence with new word but the pattern seems to repeat itself in every paragraph. Throughout each paragraph, I do manage to keep with the same terminology so the topic for each paragraph or thought stays consistent through what it is I’m trying to say. A common theme, which is good since it is what my paper is about, is technology. There is also a clear separation in all my paragraphs where I say “but…” and then move to the opposing thought. This was actually a good activity because it allows my to make sure what I’m saying is continuous.
